I really like this poem. It has good rhythm and flow. The poem comes across personal. Yet your words really bring pictures to mind, of things that commonly set people off. I also enjoyed the life lesson of the poem, which comes across entertaining as the point is made.
I really enjoyed the way you told the story of your father. You were honest, and heartfelt. It is written very well. You developed who your father was, as the story went on. It was a very good read.
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