Hi I just wanted to say that earth is a better place because of family like you.
I have been a caregiver for 23 plus years and it's rare to find family members such as your self.
I have a in and out on here I thought you might be interested in taking a look at. http://www.writing.com/main/handler/item_id/114770...
if the link doesn't work just look in my portfolio under caregivers help line.
Thanks again for your kindness. Ya you might say but it's my parents I have no choice. But trust me in the years I have provided care I have seen family be real mean to loved ones who have forgotten a name or what ever it may be...
Wow you drew me into this story I completed it all the way to the end. You made me feel bad for the character and all she was going threw. You may eventually want to resume this story. Does she get the abortion? and or does the relationship continue? I mean I can guess but it would be in my opinion and its the writers I want.
Please let me know if you write more on this.
Thanks
Jewel
dimondj2
I have asked that this be put on the review page. I think it is well written and thought out. A real tribute to our soldiers.
it truely mad me think of how brave they all are and for what.
I feel for the families that have lost loved ones during this hard time.
What a wonderful way to express your love for someone. I enjoyed your poem and i'm sure the person you wrote it for was emotional when they read it. As it would hard not to be.
You can tell you wrot this from your heart and realy took time to plan it out Great Job.
What cool poem. here I thought you was talking about an enemy but I guess at one point in our lifes we are our own enemy's.
Keep writing I would love to read more.
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