That was really good. Pretty twisted ending there adn though it was not a happy one, the whole story seemed to have an air of comedy. The only thing would be that the iea with waking up in the same day was used so many times, that it's like a cliche. Still. yours was different and overall made up for it. I really liked it, you should keep on writing :)
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