This was so touching. Is this fiction? I have never read something so beautiful. Drug addicts and alcoholics deserve a chance. If this is is a true story about you and your friend, God Bless You. You are a wonnderful writer and I hope you continue writing short stories. You seem to have a writer's mind. Sorry. I'm going on and on about how much of a good writer you are. Happy Writing, Dodgeram
This was a very creative story. I love your characters. I suggest, (just a tip) making it a little bit longer. I loved the story but it was just to short. You are probably a very busy person. I will let you get back to writing your absolutely wonderful stories now. Happy Writing, Dodgeram
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