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159 Public Reviews Given
159 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I do my best to give an honest assessment of what I'm reading, I don't nit pick on spelling and grammar but will mention something that is glaring and should be pointed out.
I'm good at...
Reading,Writing but not so much Arithmetic. I like to walk and seeing what is in my sight line.
Favorite Genres
Mystery, Thrillers, Nature and whatever comes along
Public Reviews
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Afternoon Tim Chiu - I came upon your poem after hitting Read & Review. I've read your poem and liked the words you used. It feels like they come from the heart, expressing what she means to you. I think you did a good job. Keep on writing.
lucky dog


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Review of They Call Me...  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good Afternoon autumnjave - I pushed Read & Review, and your Poem came up. I've read your words and found them interesting. I don't read a lot of poetry, but found your words somewhat inspiring. I can see where the Genres you mentioned in your poem fall.
Keep writing and have a great week


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good Morning lovebird - I came across your poem when I hit Read and Review. I enjoyed your poem, and felt you chose your words with care. your poem was easy to read and moved at a good pace. I'm not a poet so I don't know if this suggestion has any merit but your last line might read - but wanting the animals to be with me -
It's a good poem and I think you did a good job. Keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review of Finding Flies  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Afternoon winklett - I came across your poem when I hit read and review. I must admit I enjoyed your poem, stretched it out and made it last awhile. The verses roll of your tongue and are a delight to read. I think you did a good job. I was fun and brought a smile to my face. Keep on writing. You did good!
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Evening foxhole: I've read your essay and found it to be inspiring and full of some historic information. I enjoyed your story and I picked up on one mistake and possible changes that (I think) might make it read more evenly.
In Paragraph 6 - you repeated the same sentence twice.
In Paragraph 14 - 3rd line Never let it (be said) - next sentence
Pledge Now, and join me
I'm not sure if my suggestions are correct and as I read it felt more cohesive to me. I think you did a great job, and thanks for asking me to review your peace


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Tim - I hit Read & Review and your Poem popped up. I did enjoy it, but I will admit to reading it several times to let the words sink in.

I like the way you put the adversarial portion in the first paragraph and the ability of the combatants to come to an understanding in the second. I think you did a good job. Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good Morning Gel - I've read your Snowball Statement and found it interesting. You've made your concerns known and I feel for you, but nothing stay's the same. Grow and seek, you're young, there is a whole world of things to look forward to.

Take it from someone much older, Life is always changing, sometimes better and other times worse. Learn to roll with punches and you'll come out ahead. Have a good day and keep writing, expressing your feelings it will help to calm you.
lucky dog


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Review of Beach  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Turtle - I've read your three Poems, and I can see where your thoughts came from by your explanation at the end. It sounds like you enjoyed yourself and your Poems reflect that. They are short and sweet and express the fun you had with your father. Good Job
Keep on Writing
lucky dog


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Review of Angelina  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
HI TeeMarie15 - I've read your story, and it was very touching. You have done a good job of telling about your life and your twins. I'm sorry for your loss. You found strength in finding the words to describe the loss you feel, even though it all happened when you were very young. Please keep on writing you express yourself well
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Morning Fyn - I've read your poem and I enjoyed it, though I did have to look up the meaning of Halcyon. The more I ponder on the poem the more insight I get into (what I think is) the true meaning. You did a good job - keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review of All The Time  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Kenzie - I've read your story and I agree with your statement that God is Good all the time. Since what I've read happened in 2003 and it is now 2025, I'm hoping you found some relief from all the issue you went through.

You've certainly had your fair share of problems. Your written report covered it all in detail, or at least what you wanted to share. I'm not sure how to evaluate this peace, it is life with it's ups and downs. I think you covered the issues you were dealing with, so again I hope life has gotten better. You did a good job of explaining what you went through. Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Howdy - I've come to port after hitting read and review and out popped a poem. I enjoyed it, so I checked out your site. Very good I have 1 year on you, but I've enjoyed what you have written.
Don
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Morning Beholden - I've read your poem and the information provided about Mr. Marais. Your poem was profound and after reading all of the material. I re-read your poem and it brought a smile to my face. I think you did a good job and I enjoyed it. Keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good Afternoon Seuzz: I've just completed reading your story. It definitely had feel of horror. I not used to reading this type of story, but I think it flowed well, and the story itself was interesting. It might not be my cup of tea, but I think your story has merit
keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
HI losing cat - I've read your poem and it flows well. I'm a senior citizen and I'm not sure whom you're romancing. There is no name to associate with whom you're talking to. You certainly put some work into it. Maybe you can give me a hint? Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon G.B.Williams - I've read your statement of fact, and found it very up lifting. Your words were sincere, and you expressed your thought very well. I liked your peace and I think you did a good job. Keep on writing
I concur with statement and look to God in the same manner.
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi Chastoney - I've read your story, and though different if kept my interest, and I enjoyed it. Listing it as Fictional right where it should be. The story was easy to read and moved along at a good pace.
Keep up the good work and Keep writing
lucky dog


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Review of The Raven  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sumojo - I've read your peace and enjoyed your story line. I thank you did a good job. I hadn't thought about the poem in a long time, but your story brought right back. Your essay flowed very well and was easy to read. Keep up the good work
lucky dog


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Review of My teacher  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Obama smoothline Good morning - I've read your peace and enjoyed it. There was a good flow to your words and it was nice. keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of Betrayal  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi DeelIsMe - I've completed reading your story and I enjoyed it. It moved along at a nice pace and kept me interested. I think you did a good job and I didn't see any grammatical errors, but I'm not a pro in that area. Keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review of Clean Slates  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
HI AB2 - I've read your thoughts, and find them somewhat thought provoking. You have blended the thoughts together and then reflect on beginning again and not judging. I agree that we want different and here's to finding it. Good Job - keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of We the People  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Cheshire - I've read your peace and wholeheartedly agree with your summation. You covered a lot of ground and the wording flowed nicely.

The only thing I saw was the last paragraph did not have the space between after (double edged sword?) You may have wanted, and did keep them as one paragraph. If so never mind what I said!

You did a good job - keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi OlyviaB - I've completed reading your story and it was very good. The story line moved along nicely, and it kept my interest to the end. I think you did a good job. Keep on writing!
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Morning Tim - I've read your poem and I've read it several times. It is thought provoking! I think you did a good job, I liked your peace.
keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good Morning King your peace is short and sweet - but it says a lot about Love. I liked it! Keep on writing
lucky dog
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