A very promising beginning, with witty writing that feels very true to the characters. It's a pity this one hasn't gone anywhere -- something that's sadly the case with a lot of quality stories. Well-written chapters are a tough act to follow! Regardless, I really like the potential in this one, and the back-and-forth between Daria and Jane is great.
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