There are definately parts of this that move me. The straining sails and the winds blowing the letter from the feeble hands are definately great samples of imagery at play. The repeating line is a bit overdone in my opinion, however the emotion is definately well transcribed. I definately feel the despair and pain in the end of the poem and the emotions are definately well represented in the poem.
Very T.S. Elliot. Love it. An extremely well told and funny story. The great thing is I can cast several aquaintances into these rolls which makes me laugh all the more. "But her youthful disposition is quite aware of his poor aim." Awesome line, it conjures so many different thoughts. Very, very well done.
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