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Review of pity party  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hey, LuisPadilla! I am here at the WdC Power 'Review me list' trying to write my review for your piece entitled "pity party" Open in new Window.

Please keep in mind that my review is primarily based on my opinion and you may ignore it, if you see fit.

I read this piece and it's very interesting. It's flowing well from the start to the end just like a well constructed story. I like reading your poem. Good job*Exclaim* I also interested not in just reading you but in helping you too. *Smile*

I have a very few recommendation to you regarding this piece and that I want to share it with you below just to improve your writing. All I lists them*Down*

1. You may capitalize the title of your poetry.
2. You may need to rearrange your writing on the *Left* align.
3. I think the word answer should be answered and you can see that in stanzas 5, lines 2. In stanzas 9, lines 2 the word sank should be sunk
4. You may also need to rearrange your stanzas/verses and I think it would be great if you put 5 lines in each stanza.

Those I highlighted above for you just for better demonstration. Thank you very much for sharing your wonderful poem with us. I hope to see more from you soon. You Rock*Exclaim**Music1**Music2* *Cool*

*ThumbsUp*luck and God bless you.

Write On*Exclaim*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Power Reviewer! I am here at the WdC Power 'Review me list' trying to write my review for your piece "A Balance of Emotion" Open in new Window.

Please keep in mind that my review is primarily based on my opinion and you may ignore it, if you see fit.

This is a wonderful and awesome short poem and I like it! (Laugh) Anyway, I think this piece is great and I see no error in it. It's flowing well and neatly written. Nice job!

I hope to see more like this one.

Good luck to you and God bless.

Write On!

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Review of This is My Cry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Pal,

I’m going to review this piece of yours entitled 'This is My Cry Invalid Review Open in New Window but anyway these are my opinions that I assemble in my review. You may disregard, if it’s doesn’t fit.

This poetry holds a powerful meaning which is very interesting. It’s well conveyed and that I could easily trace what this piece, trying to expressed here. Also, it’s flowed well and done nicely. Good job!

The stanzas/verses stand in a four lines which support this piece appeared precise. The second stanza delivered a powerful message to the couples and much interesting, how it said in a rhyme which I like it much.

We have to take an action
To the so-called over population
Hungry mouths need solution
Think now and make the right decision

I suggest you to link some punctuation to the last stanza. Keep up the good work and Write On!

Thank you very much for sharing your poem with members like me.

I am looking forward to work with you at the PDG Newbie Project, this coming July. Good luck and God bless you.

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Review of Who was Jesus?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is an interesting poll questions, but I rate it 4.5 because something bothering me and that might be some optional answers that I wish to see but it wasn't there.

Put up more poll questions like this one.

Thank you so much for sharing your poll *Smile*
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