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Rated: E | (3.5)
Although I have not read all of this interactive (like many of its cast members, it is impressively large), what I saw was very consistent in tone and style considering the large number of authors. Although the variety is very appealing, I think one weakness of this series is the large number of potential protagonists. Combined with the fact that each chapter for these characters splits into at least two more, which in turn split into two more and so on, leads to a lot of paths leading to dead ends. I think this could be mitigated by having individual chapters be longer, with a fewer choices overall that have a greater impact on the plots. That said, I'm loving what is there right now and look forward to doing my best to contribute to this project.
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