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Review of Ardria  
Review by R.N Rosenthal Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (4.0)
I like the story, but you used the word "lush" three times and it seems a little awkward. Other than that it was a great story! Synonyms of lush: Abundant, dense, green, lavish, luscious.

-RN Rosenthal
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