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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi G.B.!

This review might be a little biased because this piece really resonated with me, but I absolutely loved it.

The slight criticism I might level at this is that I would have perhaps paused more in certain lines such as

"Broken, defeated[,] and desolate..." or "....to tell the world[,] you have feelings. etc

Really great job!
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