Your style reminds me of my own after reading 3 of your writings. Short and sweet, with lots of emotion. Easy read, and like myself you don't seem to care about all the rules, no need to ryhme, lol.
You made me laugh and smile, thank you for that! My grammar is horrible so I'm not the best critique. I liked your use of semicolons, and commas. It's a little pet peave of mine when I read all these poems that go on like a run on sentence. Great write!
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