A very pleasant and well written little story. I like the way you handle the first person approach, and stick to it, as sometimes people head hop and get confused. Her anticipation and feelings show very clearly but aren't overdone, so nice work there also. The poem at the end was sweet, and made me smile. Keep on writing, nice work!
Eva a.k.a E.R. Haze / Romance Author
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/eeva
Generated in 0.08 seconds at 11:26am on Mar 09, 2026 via server WEBX1.