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Review of ANCIENT GIFTS  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I applaud your words and thoughts. These are the thoughts that I too have many times. It is up to us to let others know that science isnt the only gift we have but that many things have been learned in times before.

You do a great job expanding in this area *Smile*

Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your alluring style and mysterious style really lends an ear to hear the things that many cant hear.

I hear what your weaving in this surreal tale told in rhyme and rhythm!!!

I alway have enjoyed visiting your port... It just seems hard sometimes to find something I havent read *Smile*

I will be back periodically and I know I will find emotion filled visions as I have here with this rare find *Smile*

Your friend
John
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Review of Martial Arts Poll  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jeet kune do and Shotokan are two martial arts I have trained in and appreciate the peace of mind and knowledge that they have helped me to achieve. I learned these techniques and ended up breaking my instructors arm in the full contact version of this training.

Nice poll.
John
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Review of Words  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your talent shines my friend within these "words"!!!

I enjoyed finding something that is so expressive and well thought out *Smile*

I enjoyed this very much and the truth within it shines and glows to each and every reader that takes the time out to check it out *Smile*

Thank you for posting this my friend

Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I have been amiss to returning your reviews for both me and my son's writing. I am hopeing that today I can make up for this.

I found this style and form quite encompassing and also the subject is one I havent really contemplated.

Its with favor that I return my review of your poem. I really enjoyed this as you can use this as a metaphor to many thing.

Nice Post!
Your friend
John
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Review of Shelby Lynn  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Wink* I think that having read the contents of this folder gives me the right to rate the folder.
I enjoy reading and I am glad to have read your daughters wonderful poem. It is interesting what inspire those who choose to write whether its poems, books, stories, or experiences.

I thank you for posting this fine folder *Smile*
John
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Review of To dream.....  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
It looks like a good poem to teach those who read poetry.

I like the origionality of reading writings that we ourselfs create personally.

I used to have a folder of quotes that others had and then I had a thought why not just wipe it clean and use my own. I felt like me getting ratings for others writings wasnt right for me.

I have had numerous ratings of my own quotes now and I am glad I chose to change it... But that is just me.

I thank you for posting a poem that you enjoy *Wink*
John
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Review of Anticipation  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I had forgot how intense playing hide and seek could be *Smile*

Today Im sure it is probably the playstation games that keep our young glued to the tube.

Its refreshing to see that the games I played when I was young are still out there and being played!!!!

John
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Review of Poetry  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I see your a well read author here and I can understand why *Smile*

I feel all folders should be rated to help others and your exposure!!!

I was looking for the post you suggested I check out. Ill keep stumbling around. I am sure Ill find it my friend

Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I found this in the public reviews!

I lost my father and I can relate only too well to what a loss this is.

I have worked in and on many facilites in Texas that are "Assisted aid facilities for the dementia and alzheimer impared patients" To me these are one and the same. The only difference being is that the parents here dont always remember their children. You are very fortunate it seems.

Your writing shows alot of caring and that you are a giving person. I like both of those qualities *Smile*

Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ahhh yes... I too was at the mercy of the "Weather forcasters" (for many moons) lol. I now reffer to this form of employment for many and I suggest we call them their true name... The weather-guessers. I personally use the rock method to determine the state of our weather. If there is a shadow beside the rock... Its sunny, if the rock is wet... Its rainy, if there is snow on the rock... well there really is a problem with that here in Texas but anyway... its snowing! LOL

Thank you for this endearing read!!!

John

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Review of Just For Today  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Exceptionally written!!! It has a very positive feeling and leaves this reader feeling like wanting to follow in the direction your leading!!!!

This is a talent, for someone to take words and after reading them the reader feels something. I enjoyed this read!!!

See you in the reviews *Smile*

John
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Review of Ecstasy  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
These feelings that you have experienced really tells a story!!! I like this poem it shows that with love that two can go places that single people cannot.

I like the way you bring closure to this... It is a nice touch to place this ending on it!!!

Your friend
John

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Review of La Belle Dame  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ahh the story in poetry! This is a ride that we all must make. I pray I get on the right train and not the train of the insane...

I have been on the latter and it wasnt a joyride by any means. I have reffered to it in a few poems and they take on a dark side from time to time... This however balances the scales to show the human side that can change from one to another side.

I suggest others read this and look deep into the lines...
John
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Review of Where were you?  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the arms of another woman of course. I have seen it from the male side all too often. Its not just a one way street in a relationship. The traffic goes both ways.

Too often we find this out about one we have chosen to be our partner after its too late.

I can readily relate to this poem and as sure as I am typing this to you right now its going on in thousands of circles around us.

Thank you for this post!!!

John
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Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Poems of a spiritual nature touch me many times. This one does for a fact. I needed to read this today. I believe Angels come in all forms and I believe this with my heart.

I welcome you to this WDC community and I hope that you meet many kind folk here as I have. Many have helped me get more knowledgeble about writing and grammar and I cant say enough about them.

I hope to see you around here from time to time *Smile*

John
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Review of I Lost Someone  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
You have learned English well. However your sentence structures are weak in a few places. I am sure that in time this will become a thing of the past and you will grow into this English language!!!
john
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Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is quite a sig!!!! I like it too.

Many people make sigs here and I admire them for that... I for some reason unknown to me cant even make a stick man on the paint program... I may need a different program but I dont think its a program error LOL'
Your friend
John
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Review of Reclamation  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lou your writing lends credibility to the places you have been and the places you write about!!!

I have enjoyed each word I have read from your pen and I will find my way back here even if I have to swim a bayou or two *Smile*

Always your friend and fellow poet
John
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Review of Midnight Show  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I have met a most wonderful woman here that was a police officer. This reminded me of some of her writing. Your style is different (of course) but it leads to many of the same conclusions that this poem sends me to.

Maybe you remember her from a while back Remmington. I think it would be wild to ride with the police especially here in Houston. My uncle was a houston Police officer for almost 30 yrs and so I have been told many war stories. Thank you for this post Nikola

Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think its antedotes like this one that keep us human beings and dont allow the arrogance to preocupy our thoughts. This to this reader shows that we are all human and capable of making errors in judgement or in actions.

The pink color takes away from this poem in my opinion.

I hope to read more from you in the future my dear fellow author

John
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Review of Creative Echoes  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
From what i have seen here I will be back again and again and again....

I like the style and consistancy of this port and its an enjoyable ride that I took while here *Smile*

I havent been here in a while and I am glad I took the time out to visit your illustrious port again *Smile*
Your friend
John
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Review of Death Echoes  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This very unusual and yet very intriguing poem is well told and written. I can see it took alot of deep thought and concentration to arrive at this kind of poem. It is unique in the subject detailed... In fact its a one of a kind in this readers mind!!!

Well done *Smile*

John
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Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This type of subject really brings to the forefront many gifted writers here.

I havent been inside your port for a while (at least to publically review that is), and now I am back here.

I find your writing quite entertaining and endearing!

Your friend
John
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Review of The Poetical Mind  Open in new Window.
Review by Emilbus™ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this jewel in the public reviews *Smile*

I am happy to have read this as I tend to enjoy reading and writing poems myself. I always like a glimpse inside another fellow poet's heart to see the emotions that explode on the screen before my very eyes!!!

I thank you for posting this and look forward to my next journey into your wonderous port my friend

Your friend
John *Smile*
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