Overall, a short but poignant piece! The tone is solemn and the nameless characters create a sense of mystery. I especially like the part, "She [...] shrugs farther into the shawl around her shoulders, hoping to ward off the chill- and the stale smell of sickness- in the air." Great imagery, indeed!
I.M. Kingfisher
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