This is a truly great piece of work that you've written, and it really contributes a lot of insight into the psychological aspects of teenage life. While reading it, I was completely engulfed by every word, and it really has so much depth and detail, while it lack..lol...boredom, as i have found many pieces do. Its a very interesting piece, and very enjoyable at the same time. Its a good portrayal of the feelings, emotions, and insecurities that are instilled in the majority of teenagers. I could easily relate to this piece, and it really felt as if one was looking inside the mind of another person, and I love the Irony throughout. You did a great job showing how what people feel and see is not what is always happening. 2 thumbs up:)
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