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Review by fendi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is very cute and so very sweet I wish some one asked me to my dances and felt that way about me but I love it and Im gunna keepn reading more
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Review of Had I Known  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this its very personal I've been there before it brings back memorys. But we never know what will happen we can only go with the flow and as you take the journy you learn things about your self
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Review of Graveyards  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
this is very tru
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Review of After  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
aww very sweet poem I love the emotion you put into it I wrote something like this its called IF I DIED TOMORROW so i can relate to this poem
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Review of Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
really like this and this is really what is thank you for sharing
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Review of Everything  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very sweet poem filled with love I felt all the emotions as if it was me
now you said it was for ur bf but u haven't givin it to him cuz ur not sure he would like well this is just my opinion if he loves you as much as do him he will love it
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Review of Crying Earth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is true not tomsny people care about they do to the earth or the creatures on it those people are selfish and will pay for what they done I love this poem and respect you for writing it. thanks for sharing
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Review of The Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
aaaaawwwww so sweet and full of love and so vivid I almost feel like i went on the journy to I do love this poem please keep sharing. Also I feel its contest worthy in my eys
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Review of Alone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
awwww this is very sad but I hope you know you are never alone :)
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Review of lovers kisses  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Ok this is just my opion so dont take it personaly its just to help It sounds good but a bit childish or highschool and you might want to reread and check you're spelling I seen a few mistakes it is a good story but it needs a little work
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Review of My Oxygen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
aaaaawwwwwwww so very sad and touching I enjoyed reading it
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Review of How is it that  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem heres a thought or you might have forgot in the last line " What is it that makes me remember" I think there should be a you at the end just a sagestion But other than that its a great poem
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Review of Heaven  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very moving short but detailed
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Review by fendi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very touching I felt all the pain as I read it and know how it feels I enjoyed reading it cant wait to read more.
one quick thing if you dont mind did you mean to "me" in this sentance "Was the day you made realize"
All in all I loved the poem.
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Review by fendi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this its very true some like to think they have power of there own destiny but our paths are already chosen and you remind us of that thank you cant wait to read more
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Review of Roscoe's Pictures  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
wow this a great photo almost looks like theres montains in the sky how did you add photos
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