I loved this story, it was very fast paced and really heartwarming. I loved how you felt that Stephen really was at peace and that Bethany could move on with her life. The only tip I could give you would be to write more!! This is a great story but broken down into more description about events could also make a great novel? Good Luck....
Justin, I really liked your memoir. It is a little hard to understand as is seems to just be an excerpt but I think that your descriptions and narrative is lovely. Good Luck with it!
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