A nice story giving the feel of the narration of probably the first woman to have ventured out to know and operate a radio in her hands, compromising for it her freedom and name and even agreeing to solitary existence.
An interesting description of core of business conversation taking place between two persons , in the future times with plans to set up factories in space and also to invest in them.
A litle description of the settings of the conversation would have added more ambience effect. As you know Space and Time (age included) are the two most important features of a Sci-Fi story.
An interesting bit all the same and a good attempt.
Best wishes,
Phean Lane
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