I enjoyed your haiku very much. It's well-written, cohesive and the poem form is consistent. The piece. The piece uses the prompt well to build a solid foundation. The poem creates a vivid picture for the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written haiku.
I enjoyed your monologue. It uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. I enjoyed how you split the monologue into separate sections. This makes it easy for the readers to follow. There are a few suggestions I have. There are quite a few spots where the first word of a sentence is uncapitalized. For example, in the second sentence at the very top the "i" should be capitalized. Fixing these would improve readability. Also, in the second full paragraph there's an extra ":" after the love. In the second paragraph of the second section, with the word "FastFoward", it should read "Fastforward".
I enjoyed reading your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece conveys its subject clearly to the readers and the tone remains consistent. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't impede the poem's flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme but that doesn't detract from the poem or imped its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey it subject to the readers. The grief is clearly expressed throughout the poem. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written, emotional poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The poem uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't detract from the poem or impede its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story. It's well-written and cohesive. The suspenseful atmosphere is well-constructed and remains steady throughout. The piece uses its length well to tell the story. There were no errors that I noticed. The only suggestion I could make would be to lengthen the story some to build up the suspense and spookiness a bit more. This is only a suggestion, so feel free to disregard. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your sample very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are interesting and distinct. The world-building was sprinkled well throughout without being an infodump. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written piece.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The poem conveys its subject well to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't detract from the piece or impede its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The poem uses its length well to convey its subject and build a spooky atmosphere. There's no rhyme scheme but that doesn't detract from the poem or imped its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme is consistent and solid, supporting the piece's overall flow. The piece conveys its subject clearly throughout the stanzas. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your piece of prose very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece conveys its subject clearly to the readers. The descriptiveness of the piece creates vivid distinct images for the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written piece.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme is consistent and supports the poem's overall flow. The subject is conveyed clearly throughout the stanzas. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The prompt was well used and created a solid base for the story. The tone remains consistent throughout the piece. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme but that doesn't detract from the poem or impede its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters were interesting and distinct. The plot was solid and easy to follow. I enjoyed the small glossary you put at the end. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story with good characters
I enjoyed your story. It's well-written and cohesive. The suspense is built up well throughout the story. The characters are clear and distinct. There are a few suggestions I have. First, at the end of the first section, when the main character's mom says that she took her grandmother's death hard, the word "hard" is missing its first two letters. Second, the first part of the second section is clearly center aligned when it should be left aligned/justified. Also, there are several instances where characters are speaking that are part of a paragraph when they should be their own separate paragraph. An example would be in the second section when Andy's first talking to his boss. These are only suggestions, but they would improve the readability of the piece. Overall, a good story with a spooky atmosphere and good characters.
I enjoyed this word search very much. It's well-written, cohesive and challenging. The words were well-hidden without being overly difficult, providing a challenge for searchers without being frustrating. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-constructed challenge.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme is solid and consistent, which supports the poem's overall flow. The piece uses its length well to express its subject clearly to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed this word search very much. It's well-constructed and challenging. The words were well-chosen and well-hidden without making it feeling impossible. I enjoyed the theme for the search. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written, challenging word search.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme is consistent and supports the piece's overall flow. The poem uses its length well to express its subject. I enjoyed the varied lengths of the stanzas. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey is subject to the readers. The rhyme scheme is consistent and supports the poem's overall flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The poem uses its length well to capture both the holiday and how it can go sideways while still being memorable. There's no rhyme scheme but that doesn't impede the poem's flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme is consistent which supports the poem's overall flow. The piece has humor sprinkled throughout the stanzas. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to express its subject to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme but that doesn't detract from the piece or impede its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
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