I enjoyed this chapter. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its descriptions to create distinct, clear images for the readers. There were only two minor errors I noticed. In the first paragraph, the word "swallowing" is missing its second "w". Also, there's no space between the third and fourth paragraphs. The main suggestion I could make would be to lengthen the piece, as this would give you more room to work with. Overall, a solid start.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The world-building was well-executed and sprinkled throughout the story, giving it a solid foundation without being an infodump. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject.There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't impede the poem's overall flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme but that doesn't impede the poem's flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to express its subject. There were no errors that I noticed. The only suggestion I have would be to expand the story to add more detail. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The plot was well-executed, and the story used its length well to express its subject clearly to the readers. I particularly enjoyed the humor of the little dog getting up to mischief. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The poetry form is well-executed and consistent. There's no rhyme scheme but that doesn't detract from the poem or impede its flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. I enjoyed how you set the story up, from the journey to wondering if they actually succeeded and then the appearance of the insects. There were no errors that I noticed. The only suggestion I could make would be to lengthen the story to add to the atmosphere, but since the piece was written for a contest, I understand why it's the length it is. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme is solid and consistent, which supports the piece's overall flow. The poem uses its length well tp convey its subject well to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The plot was well-set-up and executed. The story uses its length well to covey its subject. The story took a direction I didn't expect, based on the warning at the top. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. I enjoyed the unexpected direction the story took. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed this first draft very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters were interesting and distinct. The story uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written first draft.
I enjoyed your poem. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. I enjoyed the use of blinking stars in the first stanza as it sets the mood for the rest of the poem. The only small error I noticed was in the first line of the section, where the word "I'm" doesn't have an apostrophe. Also, the second to last section ended up a paragraph instead of a stanza. Having a sudden paragraph in a poem was slightly jarring. Changing that could improve readability. These are only suggestions, so feel free to ignore them if they're unhelpful. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject clearly to the readers. There's no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't impede the poem's overall flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme is consistent and supports the poem's overall flow. I enjoyed how you wrote from the perspective of the mountain. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. I enjoyed the repetition of the line "oh the cost I've paid". It supports the poem's overall flow. The rhyme scheme is consistent throughout. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject. I enjoyed how the poem is written in the form of a letter from aunt to nephew. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The main character was clear and distinct. The world-building is interesting and well-executed without being an infodump. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. The descriptions created distinct images of the cats and their behavior. There's no rhyme scheme but that doesn't impede the poem's flow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. I enjoyed the alternating lengths of the stanzas and how you start and end with three line stanzas. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
I enjoyed your essay very much. It's well-written and cohesive. I enjoyed how you divided the essay into sections. This supported the piece's readability and made it easy for readers to follow. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written, informative essay.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It’s well-written and cohesive. The characters are interesting and distinct. The world building was well-executed without being an infodump. The piece uses its length well to express the story. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The piece uses its length well to convey its subject to the readers. There's an air of humor to the piece that is maintained throughout. There was no rhyme scheme, but that doesn't impede the poem's flow. There were no errors that I noticed.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The characters are interesting, clear and distinct. The worldbuilding was interesting and well executed in a way that didn't feel like an infodump. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme is solid and consistent, which supports the poem's overall flow. The piece uses its length well to express its subject to the readers. There were no errors that I noticed. Overall, a well-written poem.
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