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Review of Full Moon  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey sarafina
Nice poem. I would say as a newbie, you have done your best and in fact, you've done it extremely well. Keep it up and keep writing. All you need is more experience here. I can see that you've got the potential to become a successful formalist poet.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This is a haiku. A haiku ought to have some aspects like a seasonal reference, juxtaposition of two images and it should record only one moment. Your poem does fulfil the last two conditions. It give two discreet images and speaks of only one moment. But there is no seasonal reference word, though it has a word to refer a moment , twilight. I should say a true haiku is a seasonal poem. But as a newbie you have done too well and I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Punctuations are also perfect.

THEME:

Moment of twilight with a fulmoon.

I WOULD LIKE TO ASK:



RATING:

As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:


Keep writing. You'll make an accomplished formalist poet.

ABOUT ME:

I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio Ganesh Prasad~Back Home . You can visit my blog http://www.neovisiona.blogspot.com .

DISCLAIMER:

This review is my own opinion. The group to which this review is affiliated nor any person ( if mentioned in this review) will not remain responsible for any kind of inconvenience.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hey kaitlyn yetter
This is a very nice poem, I admit. It clearly shows your love for your mommy. This poem gives the image of an ideal mother. And you've truly admired your mother in this poem. But still there are some lacks in it. I'll be praising you for your skill and pointing out your mistakes in this review.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This is basically a free verse, i think. But you have used rhyming words effectively. End rhyme makes your poem sound good to reader's ears. But the rhythm is a bit rough at some places. And I suggest you should maintain a fixed syllabic scheme for such poems. As a newbie you've done too well. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Punctuations are also perfect.

THEME:

Written to praise an ideal and perfect mother. My respects for your mother, convey it to her.

I WOULD LIKE TO ASK:

not applicable here

RATING:

As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 3.5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:

I suggest you to maintain a fixed syllabic scheme. In your poem most of the lines have nine or eleven syllables. I suggest limiting your lines to ten syllables. You have the talent and you can make a good sonneteer. *Smile*

ABOUT ME:

I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio Ganesh Prasad~Back Home . You can visit my blog http://www.neovisiona.blogspot.com .

DISCLAIMER:

This review is my own opinion on this piece of work. The group to which this review is affiliated nor any person ( if mentioned in this review) will not remain responsible for any kind of inconvenience.

Best wishes.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey radioletters
this is an awesome piece of work indeed. I really admire the way you have portrayed the emotions and thoughts of that german girl. It clearly shows the impact of war on the common men of a nation. And the introduction to characters is also too good.
ABOUT THE FORM:

This is basically a story in journal entry format. You have used discreet events described in a journal chronologically to give the reader a nice impression of your thoughts. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
Basically sadness and story of families shattered apart during the war.
RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
A bit more attention to imagery could have made it better, I think.
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.neovisiona.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
5 stars and just one word 'awesome'.
I admire the refrain lines. They do sound good and make sense.
Keep writing.
Have a nice day ahead.
Best wishes.
Ganesh
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Review of Samhein Prowlin'  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hey dave
I had missed your reply. That's the cause of this late review. Well, extremely nice use of alliteration. I really enjoyed your poem. Best wishes.
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Review of Rivers Of LIfe  
In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey crazed
i found your poem very interesting. I don't know anything about the form you've used in your poem, but what i liked is your ideas about life expressed in short. That's what makes it a nice poem. And the grammar is not bad. *Smile*
GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find.
THEME:
philosophical, i feel.
RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.neovisiona.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
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Review of Stay  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey ganja
Well written piece of work. Nothing much to say about you skill or plot or mistakes after reviews quite a number of poems by you. I daresay you are a good poet. Keep it up and keep writing. Also visit my poems, you may find them similar to your poems and like them. I'm sure we are gotta be good friends.*Smile*

ABOUT THE FORM:
i again suggest keeping every line in a fixed syllabic limit. You have tried to make them all ten syllables long but i think you are not much clear about one syllabic and multi syllabic words. If you keep writing like this you'll certainly emerge as an awesome poet.
GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.neovisiona.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
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Review of Lonesome grave  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey ganja
Well written poem. Quite similar to my own story. So i liked it very much. Nothing much to say about the plot. It's really good and emotional... Lost love and lonesome feelings... A hearth touching poem... Awesome

ABOUT THE FORM:
i suggest keeping every line in a fixed syllabic limit. Most of your lines are in pentameter but lines 7, 10, 11 and some others are not in that fixed scheme. Yet it's presenting awesome rhyme and rhythm. Well done. You oughta be a formalist and try different forms of poetry.
GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.neovisiona.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Review of Imagination  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey ganja
This is the second poem from your port which i am reviewing now. This is nice poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it. I think the idea of exploding hearts makes the poem feel odd at the beginning. A change in wording may make it better. And i really admired the idea of wandering with someone special without any destination. And the description of sea waves clashing is also awesome. By now i feel that you are not that newbie but an experienced romantic poet.

ABOUT THE FORM:

free verse, as it can be clearly seen. But the rhyme and rhythm are too perfect. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I really liked the theme of your poem.
RATING:
I am giving it 4.5 stars. *Smile*

SUGGESTIONS:

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.neovisiona.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
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Review of Live this  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey ganja
This is a very good poem indeed. I really liked it. It clearly shows your emotions for someone. I liked the words you have used. Actually I also feel the same sometimes. But I never dared to write that down. I hope you are from india. As a newbie you have done extremely well.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem is written in free verse. But the internal rhymes that you have used have made your poem awesome. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. *Smile*
RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
not available
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.neovisiona.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hey don
This is a nice poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it. You have witten too well. I liked the way you've expressed your ideas about cupid and valentine's day. Nice thoughts indeed.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem is basically free verse. But you have used rhyming words nicely. Syllabic pattern of your poem is uniform and it makes your work sound good. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. It reflects your quite funny ideas.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.neovisiona.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey tim
very true. This thing happens not only in case of sports but also in other fields like study arts and researchs. I have experienced this phenomenon.

ABOUT THE FORM:
nicely written and expressed.
GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

perfect.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey tim
This is one of the rare poems by you which doesn't say about bowling. I liked your insights towards our asian culture and philosophy. We should have higher ambitions and hopes.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem is basically a free verse. You have used precise words to show your thoughts well. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem.
RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 4.5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Review of Crypt of Flesh  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hey daniel
This is an awesome poem indeed. You have explained the form well in the end of this poem. I could not find any negative points out of it.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem follows the form well. It's truely a self elegy. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. It reflects sadness, protest, hope. Yet it's a self lament.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
n/a it's too good.
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey
This is a nice poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. It reflects

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com .

Best wishes.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hey SimpleDykie
I guess you're gonna publish a book on your observations, let me get a copy. You've got nice insights and an awesome conversational writing skill. I admire your skill. You've described all characteristics of a grumpy old man here. And the ending is humourous.
I learnt from this piece of work that my dad's gonna be the grumpy old man of our neighborhood.
Great job. Keep writing.

ABOUT THE FORM:

n/a


THEME:
truth with a blend of humour

RATING:
5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
n/a
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems , acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey RedInequility
this chapter opens a novel with very slight idea on theme plot and past events. May be next chapters will give some more information. I liked the way you've started it with inks of new hopes. Not that typical it is, something more than ordinary lies in it, i guess.

ABOUT THE FORM:

n/a

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:
perfect

THEME:
cant tell anything now. After reading next chapters i may figure out.

RATING:
I am giving it 4 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:

you should not have wasted so much words to describe the house. The end part is good which gives an impression of the past of the characters. I think the first part should be shortened a bit to make it more reader friendly.
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems , acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 

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Review of The Chase  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey simple dykie

awesome insights you've got. We all are living our lives just like chase, chasing various goal sometimes successfully and sometimes in vain. Yet the chase never ends nor do we find happiness. We always feel some inexorable void and pain. But your last sentence is highly optimistic. I liked it the most.

ABOUT THE FORM:

n/a

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

perfect
THEME:
I liked the insight *Smile*
RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
n/a
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems , acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
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Review of FOREVER  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey simple dykie
A philosophical essay it is. I couldn't exactly get it on the 1st try. Nice work. Not much words to say except 'incredible'.

ABOUT THE FORM:

n/a

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:
perfect
THEME:
scorchic philosophy
RATING:
4.5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
n/a
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems , acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey simple dykie
I am waiting for the next part of it. It is fictional, I think. If real, then it's a shocking yet inspiring tale. Publish the next part soon.

And this story tells of true optimism. Not a grain of sand less than 5 stars.


ABOUT THE FORM:

n/a

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up.
THEME:
one of the best, i have ever read.
SUGGESTIONS:
n/a
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems , acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey Simple Dykie
The thing you did will be counted as true love if and only if you had no regret in taking an icy shower that time. Otherwise, it's just a peace loving married life. It's really humourous. As title suggests, i would prefer hot water to love if i was you. Well, i am just 18, I ain't got no wife. So I can take long hot showers as long as I can. Married people've got to worry.


ABOUT THE FORM:

n/a

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up.
THEME:
humourous. *Smile*
RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
n/a
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems , acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
Review from "Let's help each other grow- Closed" 

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey simple dykie
You are too good at satire. I like your conversational way of writing. You've expressed your observations too well. I also feel the same when someone knocks at the door. Too annoying just like a mosquito sitting on the tip of your nose. *Pthb*

ABOUT THE FORM:

n/a

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up.
THEME:
I liked the theme. *Smile*
RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
n/a
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems , acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey J.A. Buxton
This is a nice piece of work indeed. I really liked the whole of the story. Waters came to my mouth thinking of those chocolates. I could not find any negative points out of it.

ABOUT THE FORM:
n/a

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I think it was written for chocolate day. The ending is too good.
RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
n/a
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find my poems , acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
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Review of Christian  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey mdstryker
This is an awdsome poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it. You have truely realised what jesus had said.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem sounds good with the rhyming words you have used. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. It reflects
your insights. In fact humanity is the true religion. I am not a christian, but i have read the bible and your poem satisfies my understandings.
RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
n/a
ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
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Review of The Home Sampler  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey fyn
This is an awesome poem indeed. I could not find any negative points out of it.

ABOUT THE FORM:

This poem is an ideal free verse poem. The flow of your poem is smooth. It sounds good, though there are not much rhymes. I admire your skill.

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING:

No mistake I could find. Well done. Keep it up. The punctuations are also too perfect.

THEME:
I liked the theme of your poem. The title suits it too. It reminds me of a poem, i had read in my school life. Keep it up.

RATING:
As I am really impressed with your work, I am giving it 5 stars.

SUGGESTIONS:
n/a

ABOUT ME:
I am also a formalist poet and a member of the POETIC EXPLORATION group. You can find more poems like this one, acrostic and formalist, at my portfolio. You can visit my blog http://www.ganeshindreams.blogspot.com or find my poems on facebook. My username in facebook is sharpandsage.

Best wishes.
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