Certainly smiles radiate happiness and peace... But I do not think that smiles are given only in the times of joy.... One can certainly smile in the midst of worries and woes... Nice job done... Keep writing... Best wishes.
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One of the poems that touched my heart so deeply. Yes the sun must rise... Sun has to rise... If sun forgets his duty, everything will be lying in ruins...
Good rhyme scheme. Perfectly a masterpiece. Good wishes. Have a nice day.
Seems like a good contest. But I think more tasks on poems should be given. There can be more nice tasks on forms of poetry like giving a task to write a palindrome poem or a rictameter... That would be helpful for authors.
You are really a great fiction as well as biography writer...all i wanna say is that keep it up...may be words like 'keep it up..' or 'thumbs up' or any kind of long review from a 17 years boy like me is somthing quite valueless to you...still i am greatly impressed and inspired by you...i also like science fictions...i am a student of physics(Honours) in an indian college...but i just like reading them...i have never written any science fictions yet...but after reading this masterpiece of yours i am inspired to try my pen in the field of science fictions...and 5stars to Star trek...i wish i could give more...any way always have a nice day...my best wishes...
Nice play man...really a masterpiece...but a bit too long to read at a go and get into the theme...the imagary is very detailed and influential...dialouges could have been better...and at some places i personally found that some dialouges do not match the emotions of the characters precisely...in creating a masterpiece you must give finest attention to every tiniest aspect...and at some places the scene transitions seem quite dull and usual...try to be quite different from others man...and the theme is really good...i liked it...i will be re-reading it...and may be in 3 days i will send you another review with instances of favourable changes from your masterpiece...i am a novelist myself...i got good inspiration from your work...keep writing and BEST WISHES....-ganesh.
Nice one mate...the sharp voice you have will certainly be able to change this god damn corrupted society...
I am not an american man...i am from india...
But i feel the same thing here...our leaders are also puppets in the hands of some f***ing corporate people...
Here even common illiterate people are involved in scams...one can find every type of scams in india...here are some good names that we read in our news paper everyday...
2G spectrum scam, common wealth games scam, NREGA scam, Coal mines scam, Paradeep port authority scam and many more...
We indians need a great revolution...we need poets like you and some guns...guns to assassinate our muh'f***er politicians and their f***ing sidekicks...
Keep writing and dont let the sharpness of your voice decrease...
geart job Kathie..
I liked your poem very much
it tells about deserted dreams.....broken promises and a restless heart....
i am also a poet ....
i also write about pain but your piece made me sit for 2 mins silently..
and i liked:
Writing is my soul soaring,
a flight to a Universe of Metaphors.
Sonnets of Pain, Similes of Lust.
I begged; you would not lend an ear.
It's done. Tomorrow's clothes packed.
Christmas presents left to free fall.
No need for words,
empty hangers say it all.
great job melizabeth...
i liked ur way of expressing pains
and the stanza
though the whispers of
yesterday's tune
will follow eternally
in my memories
of that
goodbye.
REally i do feel the yesterdays have a mesmerizing smell....
people always think abt those which they can never get.....
me too.....and yesterdays always ghost inside our minds...but never return...amn't i correct????
Great contest
But i am new on writing.com and I don't know how to participate in contests.
Please tell me how to submit my entry and when to submit..
my e-mail id: ganesh@writing.com
I have about 20 poems of my own...and i'll be writing more..
So please tell me how to do it..
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