This was certainly interesting, it has a good idea, you mention how you coped with the breakups with poetry, and how you learned how to deal with your sadness, I like how you even mentioned the person that inspired you to take this solution and show it to the rest of us!
This story is quite interesting, talking about the message of a fortune cookie and its messages, I can see where your coming from, you get a fortune cookie, open it up, and read something that you barely understand, it just gets frustrating at times, its a nice story and I hope to see more!
Its definitely an interesting poem, the problem I have here is I have no idea what you're talking about and don't know what to take from it, the things I take from it are that the woman is pregnant with a child and had a miscarriage, and the man is unhappy with it, so nice work, just wish I knew what you were talking about.
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