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599 Public Reviews Given
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Review Style
My reviewing style varies. I may do a little edit if possible or pinpoint what I think is incorrect. My review is merely base on what I feel about your piece. If I enjoy it, I say it. If not, I tell you why I'm not. I often do reviews on all Poetry Items- regardless of the genres, styles and the way it was written. However if you like, you can request a short story, chapter not the entire book or novel, articles and essays, etc. 2023 Quill Nominee
I'm good at...
Titles. You may ask for a better catchy titles for your piece. Rhyming for most poetry. I'll be reading your piece aloud and hear if consistent rhyming takes place. Emotions. I'm greatly affected on the emotions your piece may reveal.
Favorite Genres
All but Nature, Love/Romance, Dark/Horror and Inspirational are on top of my list.
Favorite Item Types
Poetry, Short Story, Articles and Essays. Blogs also.
I will not review...
The entire book or novel. Don't have more time to read. Maybe soon.
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Review of My Country  
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Paradoxical

I just love this poem of yours. Nice to read because of its awesome rhyming. And the scene is good to imagine. A great write indeed. Keep sharing.

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi there Dave ,

"A Pixie Wonderland" is really a great write! The title itself is alluring to every readers. The content was great and to say, I found no grammatical errors. The scene was vivid and soI love its imagery. Every line in a stanza indeed contributes to what meaning you wanted to portray. I love this sonnet of yours. An excellent write!!! Thanks for sharing.

Best regards,
GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale
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In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi there,

This was nice. With few words but has a complete thought. Keep sharing.
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In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (3.0)
I was reviewing via random and I found this piece of yours. I gave you a rating of 3.0 on this because I can't understand this kind of writing of yours. I tried using google translate but doesn't work though. I'm sorry for that. Well, I just hope and wish to read your english translation for this. If there is such, I'll be glad and would surely read.

best regards,
GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow! I love this piece! Meaningful and I can relate. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Relationship  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi there,

I give you a rating of 3.0 because I don't understand this language you are using.
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Review of shaddow  
In affiliation with I.N.K.E.D.  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi there,

This was a nice write. However, there are some words that are repeated. Well, I guess it was only a typographical error and it doesn't affect the whole piece though. In addition, some of the words must be spelled out correctly like in line "N there's nothing they can do without...." "N" must be spelled correctly as "In". And the repetitious dots must be minimized to make your piece appeared formal. And the last line must be ended with a period.

Overall, I like the idea of your piece, the imagery, and its meaning. I hope this suggestions would somehow contribute something to your writing. Thanks for sharing this one.

Best regards,
GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale
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Review of Railway to Heaven  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a great write. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of You Are There  
Rated: E | (4.0)
norswede:

First of all, thank you for joining "Romantic Poetry Contest" .

After reading your piece, I find it fascinating and interesting. I felt the emotions you want to portray. In connection with this, here are some things I've noticed:

TITLE:

The title fits the piece.

CONTENT:

The imagery is great. Well organized.

Overall:

Great write. Keep sharing.

GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
J. A. Buxton,

I truly enjoyed your composition, I didn't notice any errors or general deficiencies in terms of ideas. And to be more specific, the following were things I've noticed:

TITLE:
The title is great. An interrogation always brought the piece into the readers' eyes. It fits with the content.

PLOT:
Definitely well organized. The plot agrees and coincide with the prompt.

OVERALL COMMENT:
All I can say is WOW. I hope this story goes on for a while, and I hope you stay on WDC to keep it up. Good luck with your writing, it's a good looking story indeed. Thanks for sharing.

Best reagards,
gervic
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Review of Clandestine  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Ravenwand,

This is wow!!!. great imagery, thumbs up. Thanks for sharing.

Gervic
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Redtowrite,

This was an excellent writing. You have expressed very well your emotions for it is a free verse type of poem. Extreme imagery and of course the lines flow well. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. Great job!!!. Keep it up!

Always,
Gervic
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Ann Ticipation,

This writing of yours is unique. It's my first time to read poem like this. Every line you made is an interrogations. Interrogations of life's journey on how you actually get on there. It's an excellent write. Keep sharing.

Best regards,
Gervic
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dan Sturn

Another excellent write of yours. As I go on the poem, the beauty of rhyming and its imagery satisfies me. I love nature poems, and this is one of them. The rhyming is consistent, the imagery is very clear and the flow of lines is very smooth. Thanks for sharing.

Gervic
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Review of Love is Red  
Rated: E | (3.0)
nice write. keep it up. keep sharing.
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Review of Voices  
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
mr. meltdown,

nice poem...keep sharing.

gervic
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Review of I MISS YOU MOM  
Rated: E | (5.0)
skymac,

you made me cry with this poem of yours. you really expressed the sadness from your heart through this splendid poem. the lines flow well and the rhyming is awesome. your words made my eyes to tear and it's beyond my resistance. it made me realized how important mothers are. keep sharing.

always,
gervic
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Review of inbetween us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
nice imagery..great write!!! keep sharing..
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Review of unknown  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Ashes,

This is great....simple poem but having a deeper meaning...

"If nine lives were yours would you waste them for a tenth?"
this line of your piece triggers me to think that Life is very important...and we must take good care and value it because it is the only gift we have from Him that can never be exchange for something...Life is precious...yes it is precious. It is precious more than the value of most expensive gems...This poem is inspirational...I learned from it...keep sharing

Best regards,
Gervic
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Review of Dandelion Blown  
Rated: E | (4.0)
haiku!!! wow.. you got the 5 7 5 syllables...
simple words of deep meaning...dandelion can be a person without it's goal..
great!!!
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Review of Tender Touch  
Rated: E | (4.0)
You know what?...I can relate with this poem..of course...
You made me remember how my mother had spent his time for me since I was born...
It made me cry... Yes..
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a magnificent write...(bravo!!!!) your showed up your talent in script writing with this composition...I had once read the story itself (Blossoms Maligned) and it's and inspiring one...A love story between teenagers(that was of course gave a lesson that everything is possible to be change in a new one, a new character of person especially drawn by love). I hope to view a movie of this!!!..best write...best composition..."I wish i can have such a talent"...
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Review of Blossoms Maligned  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
bravo!!!bravo!!!bravo!!! an excellent write, no wonder you got those awards (2nd Place-Great Short Stories Contest-April 2007, 1st Place-Round 1-Crazy Insane MegaContest) for the story itself portrays a love story between a girl who was once hating those boys(school boys should i say) and this mysterious guy that was in love with her too despite all her doings. I can say it’s one of a kind story. it seems that the story has its part two so I hope to read it soon.. best write!!!keep it up bro. A++
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