I found your piece through the Read and Review page of the site and I thought of giving this a feedback. I love all your five different Lanturne poems. The meaning you portrayed where great and I envy at how wonderfully you give the message with this short worded type of poetry. Great job!
I am Ghadean, a fellow newbie and I am reviewing through the review a newbie section of this website. The title "Unworthy" is way too simple but t he impact it will bring to the readers is immense. The description creates a preview of how this piece would appear as you started to inflict imagery from there.
I can see great metaphor in this simple and short piece. I love the way you associate shiny to that someone you saw at your school's hallway. Though it has to be spelled "shiny" not "shinny". Perhaps a typo.
I was reading through the Read and reviews section of this site and found your wonderful piece. The title is kin of mysterious, it is catchy though. I wanted to know why you named it that way. I can't think of possibilities why lightning is dry, thus I was earnest to know why with your piece.
This is a very short narrative but have a strong and vivid imagery. Not bad for a writing exercise. I want to read more of your works. Thank you and Write on!
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