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Review of Witches Brew  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi SamLBinj, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* I loved the poem I could almost see the witches dance round the cauldron, casting their spells.
*Star* your work read and flowed well
*Star* It has a wonderful rate and rhythm to it, making you want to sing along.
*Star* Good luck in the competition and with your work in the future.

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Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi phyduex, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: as English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a very emotional and beautiful story it brough tears to my eyes.
*Star* your work read and flowed well.
*Star* if this is not too painful for you, you could develope this into a much longer short story about how you are coping with this.
*Star* Good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.

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Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi phyduex,my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: as English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a fantasic poem, I really enjoyed the read it kept me captivated till the end.
*Star* Your work read and flowed well.
*Star* I liked very much the way it rhymed.
*Star* The rate and rhythm, for me were perfect, it brought your poem to life.
*Star* I think with your style and enthusiasum you could get away with usiing this as an opening chapter of a short novel.*read*
*Star*Good luck in the competition and with your work in the future.

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Review of esteem practiced  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi icecroc, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challeng: as English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* I enjoyed reading your work thank you for sharing it with us.
*Star* Your work read and flowed well
*Star* I felt your work was charged with emotions from the past.
*Star* Good luck in the contesat and with your work in thw future.

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Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi Drecver, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewes fro the Weekly NewbieChalleng: as English is my second Language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* I really enjoyed the read of the poem.
*Star* Your work read and flowed well.
*Star* Your writing mad me feel some of the isolation as well, well done.
*Star* good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.

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Review of No more goodbyes  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Locksley, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge as English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* I enjoed the read very much
*Star* your work read and flowed well
*Star* I have the feeling you have just finished in a relationship and I was quite a jug to let go.
*Star* Good luck in the contest and with your work in the future

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Review of Imagine  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Georgie, my name is Raffikie I am one ofthe reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my secong Language I will comment on your writing only.
*samile* this is an interesting short story
*Star* Your work read and flowed well
*Star* I have enjoyed the way you have made the reader think about imagination.
*Star* good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.

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Review of As One  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kayla, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language I will comment on your writng only.
*Smile* this is an interesting poem.
*Star* Your work read and flowed well.
*Star* It has a good rhyme but the rhythm is a little jerky
*Star* I enjoyed the overall theme of the poem.
*Star* Good luck with your work in the future and in the contest.

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Review of My Dark Angel  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Moon Beam, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reveiwers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a very good short story IOt could have read much more.
*Star* It would make a good opening chapter to a book, may about the Vampire couples travels who knows?
*Star* your work read and flowed well.
*Star* You made me feel as though I was part of the story, well done.
Good luck with your work in the future, also with the contest.

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Review of A Father's Lament  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi rkilgore, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: as English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a very beautiful poem, I enjoyed the read very much.
*Star* To my it showed the love of a father for his daughter,and the great wrench he endured when he gave her away to another man.
*Star* Your work reads and flows well.
*Star* I love the the gentle rhythm and rhyme of your work.
*Star* Good luck with your writing and in the contest.

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Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Erin, my name is Raffikie i am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* this is an excellent piece of work I really enjoyed the read.
*Star* Your work read and flowed well.
*Star* I could just imagine an orchestra playing this.
*Star* I liked very much the way it rhymed.
*Smile* good luck in the compitition, and with your work in the future.
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Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi even though I was very bad I really enjoyed the quiz

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Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi coolestscottie, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a good short story, ireally enjoyed the read.
*Star* your story line was very good and believable.
*Star* Your work read and flowed well.
*Star* Your main character was good and I liked they way she flashed back to being her grandmother.
*Star* This would make a good short novel I think.
*Star* Good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.

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Review of Bumble Boy  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi radioshea, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a wonderful short story, I was captiveated until the end, Well done.
*Star* Your work read and flowed well.
*Star* Your characters were strong and believable.
*Star* I could feel the emotions from the characters.
*Star* This would make a very good opening chapter for a book and maybe Jonny does not give up on the piano after all.
*Star* Good luck in the competition and with your work in the future.

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Review of Miraculous Song  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi youngwriter, my name is Raffikie I am one oof the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second langiage I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a good short story, I enjoyed the read.
*Star* Your work read and flowed well
*Star* Your characters were strong and bveliveable.
*Star* I think this would make a good opening chapter to a book about Stanley and his family.
*Star* Good luck in the contest and with yur work in the future.

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Review of Our Guest Book  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Smile* This is a wonderful Idea how do I go about purchasing these and other Iteams if you do them? Raffikie

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Review of Dan  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Jem my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge : As Aengkish is my second language, I will comment on your atory only.
*Smile* This is a very moving account, I enjoyed the the read.
*Star* your work read and flowed well, there was one tiny mistake you had written (his shoots his words at me)(maybe he soots his words at me?).
*Star* your chaaracters are strong and believable.
*Star* good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.

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Review of Dying Wish  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi komal, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language I will comment on your writng only.
*Smile* This is a very emotional piece of work, I enjoye the read and it moved mr to tears.
*Star* Your work reads and flows well.
*Star* I enjoyed the way it rhymed, it set its own rhythm.
*Star* I feel you could devolpe this into a book about the plight of children in war toen areas using this as a powerful introduction.
*Star* Good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.

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Review of My Story  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jenny my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a wonderful poem I really enjoyed the read.
*Star* Your work read and flowed well.
*Star* It has a nice lilting rhythm to it.
*Star* Good luck in the competition, and with your writimg in the future.

Welcome back to WDC I aggree there are many beautiful people to help us achieve our hearts desires.

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Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Damiana

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Review of maybe  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi coolestscottie, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weeekly Newbie Challenge: As English is my second language I will comment on your writng only.
*Smile* This is a beautiful poem, I enjoyed the read.
*Star* Your work reads and flows well.
*Star* I like the way it rhymes, somes every line sometimes alternate.
*Star* Good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.

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Review of She's the girl.  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi reneaiscool, my name is Raffikie I am one of the Reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: as English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a wonderfully emotional poem.
*Star* your work read and flowed well.
*Star* I liked the way it rhymed, simple but effective.
*Star* Good luck in the contest, and with your work in the future.

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Review of Love Is  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi A Beautiful Mess, my name is Raffikie I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: as English is my second language, I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a beautiful poem, I really emjoyed the read.
*Star* Your work read and flowed well.
*Star* I liked the way it rhymed.
Simple but meaningful.
*Star* Good luck in the contest and with your wotk in the future.

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Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Shy poet, my name is raffike I am one of the reviewers for the Weekly Newbie Challange: As English is my second language I will comment on your writing only. This is a very interesting poem, I enjoyed reading it. It read and flowed well. good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.

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Review of You are not alone  Open in new Window.
Review by Raffikie Kernow Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Michelle Lynn, my name is Raffikie I am one of The reviewers for the Weekly Newbie challenge: as English is my second language I will comment on your writing only.
*Smile* This is a beautiful and emotional piece of work. I really enjoyed the read.
*Star* It reaad and flowed well.
*Star* You needa space in between no and one.
*Star* I loved the way it rhymed, it brought it more to life.
*Star* good luck in the contest and with your work in the future.

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