This story demonstrates a good lesson in life. There are a few mistakes in the writing, mostly concerning commas, but other than that, the story is interesting, fast-paced, and altogether a very enjoyable piece of writing. I sincerely hope there's more to this. One last minor note: there is a planet called Pern in another story that has been published. You might want to try a different name for the species.
This is pretty interesting. I've always had a problem with writing about the same thing twice. Obviously, you don't have that issue. There were a few spelling mistakes in there, but it's nothing too bad. In all, this was a cool story. I would love to read more of it!
That was pretty terrifying. Granted, I've never really been allowed to watch a scary movie, but still, if you were going for the 'I'm going to make you scream like a little girl' approach, it totally worked on me. I know that the main character was scared of Hell, but still, Why didn't he tell? And that also might be an idea for a sequel?
For me, it's three stars, because I have several parts of my Great Work stored on WdC, but I can't seem to get any reviews on stories that I need reviews on! My guess is that my story is just not worth reading, or something!
This was an interesting quiz. My brother loves this movie. Of course, he has minor brain problems, but his obsession was somewhat helpful here. (Not really) I'm kind of disappointed with my score. Maybe if it was a Polar Express quiz? Just an idea!!!
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