HaleySabb's (haleysabb) Reviews

I like this because its so true and understab=ndable. Everyone should understand that getting married isn't just about saying "I Do" and that it's about much more than that...

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#3829140

Review of Trapped

Review by HaleySabb

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

This is a good short story. It is very emorional and brings chills. Very good imagery as well

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#3829121

Review of Life and death

Review by HaleySabb

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I like the tone of this poem and the word choicing is really good.

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#3825511

Review of Perspective

Review by HaleySabb

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

This poem was kind of confusing to me...The world isn't flat and the sky isn't red. So that confused me a lot... And what's a mojave????

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#3825503

Review of Death

Review by HaleySabb

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

This poem was soooo good and so very true! I can't say there was one part I didn't like. If I had to choose, I would have to say the line I disliked the most was "That is why I cry" I feel as if you just wanted to rhyme and didnt really put any thought into the meaning.

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#3825493

Review of My Grandma

Review by HaleySabb

Rated: E

| (3.5)

This poem is good because it brings out emotion in people and makes them think of their loved ones.
The only part i didnt like was the "I love you peanut" part. It was a little too personal on what your nannie used to call you. Other than that it was good.

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#3825482

Review of Good Vs. Evil

Review by HaleySabb

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I LOVE YOUR POEM
It sounds so dark and mysterious.

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#3818579

Review of Stay

Review by HaleySabb

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I like this poem. My favorite part was "Forever is a day longing for tomorrow" I thought that the last few lines were very catchy. One thing I didn't like was the same line at the end of every stanza.

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#3818555

Review of How To Break A Heart

Review by HaleySabb

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I like this poem because it's very relatible. Every girl will go through this in her life at least once. The only thing I didn't like about this poem was the face that it was so predictable and everyone says these things.

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#3817540

Review of Selfless Bastard

Review by HaleySabb

Rated: E

| (3.5)

It's a wonderful poem, i love the fact that you seperated the main descriptions of age.