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Hello. I'm reviewing for Tayasky. You received three public reviews for the high bid from "Theft for Ransom". This is review number one.

This poem is short and sweet! It still holds great imagery of nature in winter. I especially liked the line about the twigs frozen, glittering with ice. Wonderful descriptions. I do like that it's short and sweet - you were able to capture the feel and picture of the land scape without make it really long. Great work!

Keep Writing!
Drachana Kestar
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello. Here is review number three. Thanks for allowing me to have a glimpse of you. I enjoyed my visit to you portfolio.

First thing, the flow was a little difficult to follow because of syllable counts - at least it was for me. The only lines where this presented a problem for me in reading were the first two in stanza two. Otherwise you stick to 10 or 11 count lines. Those two were a bit long. Also, line two in stanza three has only eight syllables making it cut short in my opinion.

I could really see the faery with the moon beams on her body. This poem is really cute in a makes-you-feel-warm -and-happy sort of way. It made me smile. Wonderful use of descriptions - billowy thrown for example. It wasn't too simple but not too complicated either. Wonderful balance. Great Work!

Keep Writing! I enjoyed it!
Drachana Kestar
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello. I'm reviewing this for Tayasky. You won three public reviews through "Theft for Ransom". This is review number one.

Wonderful acrostic. I really enjoyed the added picture to this. Added to the imagery of course as well as the feel of the poem. I didn't see any grammar mistakes or anything like that. I do like that it didn't rhyme. Too many times I feel that the rhymes can steal from the imagery of the poem. It flowed very smoothly and seemed to sound like a song in my head. Great job!

Keep Writing!
Drachana Kestar
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