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Review of Your New Mother  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Seem promising!
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Is this a short story about Lea? It looks good. Hope that she finds someone that likes the inner Lea, not just the outer Lea.
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Review of Nursery Muscle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Glad to read this short story.
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Review of Djinn in the Box  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A pleasant and surprising ending.
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Review of Demigod  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
It has been a long while I came here and now, I discovered your newest story DemiGod.sounds fun...I have been reading stuff on fan fiction dot net lately. I wrote a chapter. Hope you are ok.
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Review of The Time Belt  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
time travel stories can be fun in Fan Fiction. Enjoy it. I would not want to try it in real life due to paradoxes that might occur.
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I just started a new chapter on the 'mad scientist' experiments. This story could go anywhere. It does sound promising.-4 stars I do have a few stories of my own too.
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
how come this story is overlooked, it sounds promising.
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Review of Joshua Almighty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am not sure if I reviewed this or not. But a kinder gentler alter boy with powers can be fun. Great responsibility comes with great powers.---that seems to be the theme. Someone could change it later but I think that our hero would not be evil. here is 5 stars for you.
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Not sure how to rate this. But it is interesting to see how a male might react to being a superheroine. I am not big on R rating stuff but we still can do superhero things as heroes. I was hoping to add Hogwarts characters but it looks like that I cant. Don't worry. That is okay. here is a 3 1/2 star from me. It is not totally my cup of tea but some people may like it. I did add two chapters.
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
what if Mega was so smart and intelligent that Tom did not need to google anything anymore.
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Review of Realm Drifter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
starting with the Hogwarts chapter of my own. Our author's own chapters look well so far that it can be its own fanfiction story. I wonder if he/she has one on fanfiction.net
It will be interesting to see how well Gil does in (well, I better not spoil it)
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
It is fun creating your character with superpowers. I hope that first additional will spur on future chapters.
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Review of Science Mom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This looks fun...hope it is okay if I go with the Muscle growth section. Mary can be just a star athlete or better...It depends on the author.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I just want to know how to use my GP to renew my basic memmbership but I can't see it yet.
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Review of Stranded  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
It is so sad. I was hoping that she would try to find another lonely or sad face at the school.
Middle School was sad for me even though it was in the same city. I should have exppressed my thoughts better back then and tried to seek out other people like me.
Happily High School was much better. In fact, in homeroom, the person next to me was a geninune kind person in the 'in' group(barely). So I was accepted.

I tried to be friendly to everyone.
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Review of The Power  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
We need some more superpowered stories.. thanks for allowing us to write something that does not have be 'dirty'.
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I was trying to figure out which one would be the best for the Hogwarts books. Since the Houses had to do with the elements, it has to be the dynastic and elemental magic although Merlin and Dumbledore is the best example of the best.

The lower wizards can use wands but the higher level might be able to use wandless magic.
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks for sharing your events with the viewers. Have you googled haunted places on the net or tried to find some forums on facebook or elsewhere?
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
that is a sweet story between an introvert and an extrovert. Both personalities are benefitful to society and to each other.
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank you for an interesting article on bipolar disorder.
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Review of Power in the Word  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
is the just the first chapter of this story? I do remember this show. Too bad that the network cancelled it so soon, not giving it a chance to gain an audience. But that is not surprising. But it was great while it lasted.
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Harry Potter is still fun to roleplay, even after all these years. But we can wonder what if there were new changes involved.
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Review of Muscle Milk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
There used to be a milk commercial that had the slogan Milk Does The Body Good. If you are reading this, it is okay to try out your writing skills. Almost anyone drinks milk and could experiences changes in a science fiction story.

In fact, I had some milk already...but thankfully nothing happened. LOL
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Review by Moe Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
sounds like something from a Twilight Zone classic TV show or a fantasy TV show today. great idea. Write out your fantasy and it happens.
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