Well actually as Project 2025 was enacted from day one as you aptly we are experiencing the beginnings of this wide ranging fascist power grab. Its plan is a shock and awe style that will make some of the smaller extremely evil moves against the "regular poor slobs," mainly the 99% or so appear draconian in nature. However the truly frightening possibility, or likelihood if there is a lack of resistance is to take advantage of the general population of Americans, including the puppets who are cult followers to the max, and truly destroy major aspects of their lives. The Stephen Wrights (Have you ever heard of a Jewish Nazi?) and so many others of whom their names are shrouded in secrecy, are testing the waters to assess how far that hey can take advantage of Joe Blow. If they are able, then memories of Japanese internment camps and strong comparisons to there stench of Global events during the 1930s will become a realistic scenario. The question which boldly arises with all of this evil is just how far can they go? Can they go beyond their Project 2025, "let's see how far we can fool the peons," framework where it reaches the dangerous point of no return, or will some intelligent, yet unafraid folks figure out how to terminate this before it is woefully too late? Sometimes you have to fight fire with foam to win. Water won't work. Fighting fire with fire is cute but uses the same philosophy and a tit for tat is expected by he other side. It generally fails. Other than rhetoric here, I will conclude by theorizing that it appears many of these evil characters are planning to incite some event such as a war that can be used as an artificial reason to help them retain power beyond 2028. Keep this in mind: lots of these scummy people filled with vengeance still have an archaic thought process, and throughout history their small minds have fallen due to paranoia- the fear that someone will indeed get to them. This fear must be effectuated and pummeled into their brains as a part of stopping them before it gets too far beyond the point of no return. The "NON" dynamic duo of Scum and Musk has to feel belittled. These are small men with big plans; they can be stopped.
Nice! Whatever you learn from a past experience that will not dent your self-esteem is huge gleaming positive! That "Not caring what anyone else thinks," still gets to my brain occasionally in this advanced age of mine yet compared to my teen years I am wiser and more aware now of that "Who gives a chit!" Sadly it took me forever to realize that and try, try, try to be who I am! Sometimes not sure who I be, but glad you acquired that realization sooner than many!
Truth. Well written. Additionally who is basically dictator there, controls that country where two Friends live. It’s all true about his ways. Scump wants to emulate his good ‘ol buddy. What you wrote sadly in the past week alone, has led to the “worst instincts” side which will only grow if not somehow putting them in check.
Excellent work! You intended for it to rhyme which it did, with all points crystal clear that easily explained this man's objectives back in 2017. Frighteningly, or perhaps just the way it is, the very positions toward the working man, the upheaval of health care, and the attempts to destroy the environment, i.e., expedite global warming, are points Trump didn't completely "take care of" seven years ago. Now in 2024 his extremism and lack of accountability will truly test what is sacred in this country- the rights of others. From attacking transgenders, to the war against science and minimizing the quality of education your poem is succinct terms describes a dark doom which is portended in our near future.It's like "Trump's America - 2017" could just as well be labeled "Trump's Amerikka 2.0 2024. without major revisions. Above all what causes your poem to have such force is that revisiting it this time around shows that this dictator wanna' be's second time around likely will be more devastating than anything we witnessed back in 2017. This lends even more off an eerie uncertainty in this poem toward just how destructive his policies may well be for The US. I reiterate, "well done!"
I really loved reading that little short story. Elena soon did vivid and real sexy. "It's the ones you see at the last minute," who are so seductive and make you think to yourself, "What if..?" Here, I loved the fantasy and how it seemed that it was over regarding any continuation due to the plane crash.
It was great suspense to discover that they could not identify all the survivors of the wreckage. The reader thinks, Hey maybe Elena was not even aboard the plane in the first place.
When she walks in from the elegant car, you are flabbergasted, but then you find out it is Laras the twin. Great twist. True, "When one door closes, another door opens." If you are inclined a juicy part two could well be at hand!
Nice job!
This introductory chapter was coherent and by the third or fourth paragraph had me wondering if this encounter would become more lascivious. As I read the subsequent follow up on their meeting at the bus stop the attire of both the narrator and possibly the sultry woman were clearly stated. They were described in a pretty visual manner. I am no professional critic, nor do I want o be here. Simply my reason for writing the following is to bring up what might be more of an effort at bringing up suspense.
Since I have not read any subsequent chapters having run into this one, my suggestion (to be taken with a grain of salt or more if you so desire) is that I'd use a little more "harder core erotic" terms or vivid details surrounding the woman's physical attributes. Her body? Tits, breasts, or perhaps use some stronger language about her "bottom" as you put t. The woman's ass, or would that be too crass-pun intended. The female's anatomy is so "hot" as you are portraying it in this introduction that one might seek out a bit more juiciness.
Now I have no idea whatsoever what you followed up with after the beginning, but that is my two cents. I'd like to read further, and so will search this out since it is an intriguing start!
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