Beautiful. This poem calls me home. Well written and it sings to the soul. How I know that siren call the universe sends reminding of us where we come from and calling us home. The descriptive language is rich and invokes a beautiful picture. Congratulations on a very powerful piece of poetry. Please keep writing
This is beautiful. I could feel the incredible depth of emotion that you were trying to convey. With minimal words you have painted a picture that is both vivid and rich. It is also completely relatable. I think we have all experienced that moment of a storm of love. Please keep writing
The title grabbed my attention immediately. This poem fascinated me. I cannot explain how impactful so few words can be. This was incredibly well written and while it is perfectly contained it leaves the reader begging for more. I will definitely be looking for more of your work. Please keep writing
This poem could have been written for me and my cat. I could feel every line. It is well written and I believe resonates with every person who has ever owned a cat. I really enjoyed how the cats thoughts are put across as if a conversation is taking place. This is true poetry, something mundane is captured in a work of art. Please keep writing
The title grabbed my interest. I was not disappointed. A very novel idea. I found the story well written. While I realise that it was written with a limit on words I would love to see it expanded on and explored more deeply. The only downside is that the ending felt somewhat rushed. I found this an enjoyable read and look forward to seeing more of your work in future. Keep writing
I enjoyed this poem immensely because days like these are familiar to so many people making it immediately relatable. It so perfectly describes those days where we need a little space. I enjoyed the imagery invoked by this writing and the humorous tone that sends the message that days like these are a normal part of the cycle of life. It was easy to read and had my attention from the title. Please keep writing.
This is beautiful. You spoke to my soul. In a few words you eloquently described the war with depression. This is something that so many people resonate with. I love the images that you create so vividly. This is a poem that I will keep coming back to
The pain of creative block. A very enjoyable piece of writing that sums up the anguish of the words not flowing and the panicked search for inspiration. I enjoyed the play on a child's nursery rhyme where rain is so desperately needed. Please keep writing and may your inspiration never dry up
Beautiful. You managed to capture an intimate moment so vividly. Reading it you feel the fire of passion between lovers. Your use of words paints a piece of art. May your inspiration keep flowing
This is so incredibly relatable. As I read it it was as if you had given a voice to thoughts in my head I could never acknowledge even to my self. Your words are rich and invoke brilliant images and powerful emotions that I am sure we have all felt. I look forward to reading more of your work. May your inspiration keep flowing
This touched me on such a deep level. It held my attention from the first words. I could feel the anguish and helplessness that you are experiencing and yet ends with the light of hope. Thank you for sharing such a personal piece of poetry. Please keep writing.
I am glad I read this. I enjoyed the progression from child to young adult and seeing how the outlook on the future evolves.I found it well written. Thank you and keep writing
This captures the yearning for a lover beyond your reach. The marine imagery creates a beautiful picture of calling your lover home that is almost haunting. It is a poem rich with emotion and symbolism.i enjoyed how the warmth and light of the distant lover was contrasted by the icy, endless Atlantic Every time I read it I found something new in it's words. Thank you for writing something that touched me deeply.
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