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Review by Mark
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Ok, this is a good rant. It has a lot to say, and makes the point pretty well.
It does seem to slip back and forth in rythem, and almost go from lyrics back to prose/poetry.

I felt like I was on a four-wheel-drive outing on a sled with no shocks.

But the emotion and story are extremely raw and strong. I wish I could offer suggestions for a tempo,
but it would really have to come from the one feeling the words.

good luck, and thanks for the read - it was intereting
Mark R
iammark301
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Review of Set Reset  
Review by Mark
Rated: E | (5.0)
You need to write lyrics.
You're very talented at drawing a line, and decscribing it in a unique way. Not many ever achieve
the vision of seeing emotions and events as words, or feeling the words and phrases as you see them. I'm stunned by this work. I cannot wait to go sniff around your port.

Really "I slip the boundries from day to day" - just brilliant. I love that line.

your newest fan
Mark R
iammark301
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