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Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi C.E. Thieroff,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Oh! To Be an Ocelot.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who love to read about cats shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s about a cat with a hidden desire to be an Ocelot.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Amused that a wee cat has such lofty ambitions.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.


*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Music Box  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi S. M. Steppe,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Music Box.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about lost love shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The powerful images coming from the words.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad that a music box makes this soul think of lost love and the pain it causes.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The extra spacing made it easy on the eyes.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Witches brew sig  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Witches brew sig.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: Its simple and looks real. I can almost smell what‘s brewing.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like Halloween or witches will love this signature.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Jerk  Open in new Window.
Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Little Mouse,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Jerk.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: I love the cat, with it‘s smart-alecky mouth an no nonsense attitude.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Excited. The mysteriousness of the cat talking and the strange happenings in the shop at a liveliness to this tale.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
Over the years we had studied, played game, and went to movies together. -- game needs a “s”.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hi The Marshall,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The North and the South.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about the Civil War shall find this an interesting tale to read.


*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit disappointed.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES/TITLE: You used a variety of names that set the characters apart from each other.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
1. Men marched behind him and front. -- I don’t understand this sentence. I understand the part of men marched behind him. The and front is what’s confusing me.

2. His sword lay waiting to be drawed out. -- drawed should be drawn.

3.'' Bentoville... '' He muttered. Now longer was he going to command any regiment, he'd be doing three battalions at once.

The Battle of Bentoville. -- You missed the “n” in Bentonville.
4. These men were obviously veterans, looking at their war torn faces, he nodded satisfied, plus aslo their masses were very in good range of disgruntling the Northerners. -- Also is misspelled.

5. The Union soliders bought their guns up to shoulder level. -- Soldiers is misspelled.

6. He said once the battalions had been drawed up. -- Drawed should be drawn.

7. Scores of Blue uniformed soliders fell done. Soldiers is misspelled and done should be down.

8. The Colonel's face was that off an agonised person. -- Off should be of .

9. '' Thats where our fortune lies men! -- That’s needs an apostrophe.

There are more mishaps that need fixing, too.
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*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Angel Portal  Open in new Window.
Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Renée,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Angel Portalt.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read mysterious things and magic shall find this tale a delight.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The happy ending. Most tales from Ye Ol Curiosity Shop stories end with someone else being trapped as the new shopkeeper.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE MADE ME FEEL: It made me smile.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES/TITLE: I like the simple names you used for your characters.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
1. “I’m Alice and this handsome creature is Jaz." She rubbed the top of the cats head at her side. " So what type of Tea would you like? I personally recommend the Jasmine-mint combination. “ -- Cats needs to be cat’s. You need to remove the space between the quotation mark and the “S” of so, and do the same with the period and quotation mark at the end.

2. “Well, I don’t drink a lot of tea, would you happen to have a latte instead?”
Alice bounced away and Jaz trotted off behind her. She arrived back with within a minute’s time with two cups and some teacakes on a silver tray and a large book in her other hand. -- A space is needed between the statement from Julie and Alice bounced paragraphs.

3. “No-way. “ -- Remove the space before the final quotation mark.

4. The girl found out about the angels plans and was sad. -- Angels should be angel’s.

5. Then the curio with the Angel in it disappeared from the girls’ life and the little girl was free to grow up, leading a happy life.” -- Girls’ should be girl’s.

*UmbrellaP*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.

*UmbrellaP*POINT OF VIEW: I know who's point of view I’m in.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Lost Compass  Open in new Window.
Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Nikkilover,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, the "The Lost Compass".

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read tales about self discovery shall find this a charming wee tale to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That Dave realized that his life had meaning even when he thought his life was going nowhere.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Encouraged.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*NAMES/TITLE: Alice and Dave are simple names yet fit the characters quite well.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
1. If was as if he appeared there out of nowhere. How? -- He should be she.

2. “The rules state that I can’t sell two items at the same time to the same person,”
The white rule sheet magically levitated in front of his face as she spoke. The rule glowed on the page.
“but they also state” she continued.” that if someone is connected to an item, I must sell it to them.” -- You need to either put a period after person and capitalize but or move the two parts of the quotation together.

3. I also noticed that in several places a line was placed below the rest of the paragraph it went to.

*UmbrellaP*DIALOGUE: The dialogue sounds natural. I know who is speaking without the overuse of dialogue.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Lost and Found  Open in new Window.
Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi Nikkilover,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, Lost and Found ".

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about feeling that things are hopeless will find this an interest tale to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The tales show how confusing growing up can be and that sometimes parents expect to much from their kids.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sorrow for the character.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Red Rocks  Open in new Window.
Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Sophy,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Red Rocks.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about nature shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED:You explained what A Ghazal poem was.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Full of excitement.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Lornda, My Friend  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Lornda, My Friend.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about friendship will love this poem.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s written from the heart with lots of love.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: thrilled to know you appreciate your friend, Lornda.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. I love the use of color and that you centered this poem. To me centering and adding color give the poem some character.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hi arakun the twisted raccoon,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee tale, The Witch of Almarra.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read legends and strange tales shall find this wee tale delightful.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That the witch only wants peanut butter and jelly as a gift.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It make me laugh.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Endgame  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Paradoxical,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Endgame.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about creepy killers shall find this an enjoyable poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It has a nice rhythm that makes it move along at a nice pace.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Amazed.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Witches Brew  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi SamLBInj The Biker Poet,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Witches Brew.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about Halloween and magic shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It‘s rhythm gives it a nice pace, plus the repeating of Witch‘s Brew by Candlelight Adds to the rhythm.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It brought a smile and brightened my day.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Magic Gateway  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ShelleyA,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Magic Gateway.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The image suggests mystery and adventure waiting to be had if one only steps through the magic gateway.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.

*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.
*UmbrellaP*You gave credit to the person who designed this signature.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review by Ladybug Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maryann,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just took a peek at your images and signatures, and decided to take a peek at Unicorn Calling Card.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The mysterious hint of magic, plus the colors. Purple is my favorite color.

*UmbrellaP*The image matches the title quite well.
*UmbrellaP*The colors used are eye catching and appealing.
*UmbrellaP*The words stand out nicely against the background and do not block the image.
*UmbrellaP*The image is easy to see and I know what this signature is.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of The Old House  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi VB is catching up,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, The Old House.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read old houses shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The old house suggests a mystery of some sort or perhaps a ghost or two.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Hopeful that someone love the old house.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
Theres an old house in the meadow, -- needs an apostrophe in There’s.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Lies All Lies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Lies All Lies.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about facing what’s what shall find this an interesting poem to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That this poem holds a hidden truth, that we say things we don’t always mean.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: I‘m not sure.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
Lies All Lies -- I think it would have more impact like this: Lies, All Lies


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Remember me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Hawthorn Hearts Amara,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Remember me.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read dying shall find this an interesting poem to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That dying isn’t a bad thing.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: OOPS!
Remember me -- Me should be capitalized since it’s part of the title.
You missed capitalizing “I” several times throughout the poem.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Confidence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Samantha J. Smith,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Confidence.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about self-worth shall find this a delightful poem to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: That this poem says stand up for yourself because no one else will.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Ready to face the world with a new attitude.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Someday  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi ~MJ,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Someday.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about dreams of possibilities shall find this a delightful poem to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It inspired me to dream about being free to do something just for me.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Alive with endless possibilities.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The purple and centering this poem gave it a bit of flare.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright. I think you overused And at the beginning of a lot of sentences.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi *~*Chelle thanks anon*~*,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Dying.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read pain and thoughts of dying shall find this an interesting poem to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The shape of the poem. It draws the reader‘s attention.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: A bit sad that this soul has suffered so much that this soul wishes to die.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Just Loti,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Your Storm.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read comforting a friend or love one shall find this an enjoyable poem to read.


*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: Someone is trying to confort a friend or loved one.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Encouraged.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

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Review of Masquerade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Kleo,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Masquerade.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read love shall find this an interesting poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: The mystery behind the mask and the hidden lure of love.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Alive. The pace of the poem makes the heart beat faster.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of WITCHES BREW  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Countrymom- Spirit of '76,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, WITCHES BREW.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read about witches shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: It makes a good point about drinking and driving (flying).

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: It makes me laugh.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.

*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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Review of Within a Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi mARi♥AuctionForUpgrade~,

This review is just my humble opinion and is meant to be helpful, not discouraging.

I just read your wee poem, Within a Dream.

*UmbrellaP*APPEAL: Those who like to read magic and far away places shall find this a delightful poem to read.

*UmbrellaP*WHAT I LIKED: This poem tugs at the imagination.

*UmbrellaP*HOW THIS TALE OR POEM MADE ME FEEL: Happy. It brought a smile and brightened my day.

*UmbrellaP*TITLE: Your title caught my attention and drew me in. It made me curious to discover what this tale/poem was about.

*UmbrellaP*FORMAT: This is easy to read and understand. The different colors and centering this poem gave it some flare and draws the reader‘s eye.

*UmbrellaP*SETTING: You used a nice balance of imagery and well written words that made me feel as if I am there.

*UmbrellaP*GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION: Seems to be alright.


*ThumbsUp*Great job.

*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams -- Eleanor Roosevelt

Keep unleashing your imagination and let it fly where it wishes! -- Janet Novak*ConfettiV* *ConfettiP* *ConfettiB*

Ladybug

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