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Review of Too Much To Ask  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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The theme fits very well with the title you were given. It has good rhythm and rhyme.

Suggestions:
Only one; if the title was given to you as a prompt, it may do well to restate it near the end, just to enforce it. (Mind you this is my opinion)

I encourage you in your writing, this particular poem is well writ and conveys the emotion fluidly.
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