I saw this in the "Read a Newbie" section, and the title looked interesting.
And it very much was.
I loved how you describe the connection between the mother and child, just by the language they share.
I also enjoyed how well detailed the alien creature seemed.
Keep writing, you're very good (:
This was a different kind of poem then what I usually see, but it's a good different.
I like how you put the definitions at the bottom, it makes it easier for me to understand the poem.
Keep on writing more poems like this, I thoroughly enjoyed it and am looking forward of more of your work (:
Jajakeish~
Aww, such a funny, yet sad ending to a story.
It shows that chicken can be a clueless and heartless animal.
I like how you twisted the story.
I thoroughly enjoyed the story.
Especially their comments on when all the others died.
Keep on writing (:
Jajakeish~
Beautiful poem.
This actually describes what happened to me for a couple of months a while back.
My so called best friend ignored me until I spoke out to her and told her my feelings.
It reall spoke to me, keep up the good work and keep writing.
Jajakeish~
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