Listen this style of writing is super hard and you did a great job composing this. Wet rags slapped upon flesh is a weird imagery and I’m not sure what you were going for. Also tears mixed with sleet. Is it snowing on the beach? I’m not fully understanding the vibe that you were going for with this one.
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