I totally enjoyed reading your poem Unconditional Love # 1826498 # dedicated to your daughter. it was written in red and that caught my eyes in a powerful way and I was rather intrigued by the lay out of the poem which created an optical illusion of a pyrammid as each line l lenghtened increasingly so, from line to line, as the poem progressed.
The entire poem is very lyrical and rythmic and it expresses so very expertly the true definition of a mother's love for her child and by extension for the husband that she loves.
So many young persons could benefit from your poem : persons who do love but might not be aware of the selfless and continuous and ongoing and neverending and doting and protective nature of a woman's love for the child of her womb or for her adopted baby child.
Thank you poet for this to be treasured poem so beautifully expressed and in red.
AN EXCELLENT POEM OF VERY DEEP INSIGHT. THE LOVER IS APPARENTLY NOT THE POET HERSELF BUT A MERMAID AT THE BOTTOM OF THE SEA. i LIKE IT AND i RATE IT A 4.00
by jesucristo1950
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