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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good day FW,
Your work "Beating Rain and Speeding Cars" is a good premise. It would flow a lot better if you go through it and fix the spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors. Otherwise a good read. Keep writing!

JM Jr.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, They are all very good!! My favorite, all! Keep writing!!
JM Jr.
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