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Review by jimmyfin
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The reviews I do are in the spirit of helping you. What I see may not be what you see.
Do not ever change what your vision and heart says should remain. The images we put in ink, for our various reasons, entertain and help others think. I thank you for the gift you give and the opportunity to open my mind.

Pleas of an Unemployed Muse, is a very original free-style poem without meter or rhyme. It is said to be written in AD style - ok! Whatever it works and even has great flow from one short line to the next. I like the poem and I really like the originality. Great Job!

Please continue to write from you heart, that is our art. Continue to let us sneak a peek at
all the images you put in ink. Jim a.k.a. jimmyfin.

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Review of Midnight's Kiss  
Review by jimmyfin
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The reviews I do are in the spirit of helping you. What I see may not be what you see.
Do not ever change what your vision and heart says should remain. The images we put in ink, for our various reasons, entertain and help others think. I thank you for the gift you give and the opportunity to open my mind.

When I write a poem I try to pull on the readers mind, heart or both. I had a feeling by the time I was done reading the first line of Midnight's kiss that I was in trouble. By the fifth line, my tears were flowing. Therefore, if nobody else is touched by this poem I say lucky them, because this is one of the saddest love poems I've ever read. It is beautifully written and now I go to finish my cry. Well done!

Please continue to write from you heart, that is our art. Continue to let us sneak a peek at
all the images you put in ink. Jim a.k.a. jimmyfin.

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