This was diffrent but great, the idea about a married man dressed up in drag who likes to perform, that is a new one for me. Great idea thought you could build a whole novel around the whole I dea. So many possibilities. The story had an excelent flow to it and very compeling like doing what you want to do and make your wife happy. Good Job
Awsome story and a great learning experience for every one who has every had to deal with something like this. This story makes me think about my daughter and the world we live in right now, how I wish it was a perfect world it isnt and we have to protect our children from people out there that can do harm to them. I have to commend you on thist story it is tough going through this experience and tougher sharing it. But you help people and get them the confidence and courage to help them report crimes like this so that hey dont hurt oher people. Awsome job on delivering this story it was written very well and gave enough information that gave the reader the feeling of remorse and wanting to do something to protect adolescence good job.
Truly amazing and insperational, I have a daughter and a baby on the way and this story brings me back to my own family. This is a the type of wrighting I would love to better myself. The content is amazing and it flows as a story should. I think this story would be beneficial to other people who have children and can reminisce about the lives of their children.
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