Misery, sorrow, and despair all go done the lonely path together. This poem opens up as if there is no way around these depressing companions. the three persons of depression want you to join them, to feel and to share with them. This is an eye opener though in the fact that when you do feel sorrow. despair, of misery you want someone to share it with, to take the weight off your back. The ending is an ending of hope, and guidance, don't let that one person you know bring you down, live life happily, even if it may be a lonely one. In the words of Yes, The owner of a lonely heart is much better then a owner of a broken heart.
This little piece is wonderful. It has the spirit of adventure, making me want to ship out right now. The lands, the people, and place that you descried are alive and kicking. This piece reminds me of the novel intitiled, " The Drifters", which only makes you want to travel. This is a good piece in a time when there where good stories to tell, in the time when " the 60's hadn't been invented yet" I only wish I could have experienced those times, but thanks to works like this and others I feel like I have.
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