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14 Public Reviews Given
15 Total Reviews Given
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I'm honest and supportive, but I will give advice about things I THINK would help beef up your writing (up to my standards, which aren't very high).
I'm good at...
Chapters and short stories.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy.
Least Favorite Genres
Horror, romance, children's, and nonfiction.
Favorite Item Types
Chapters and novels.
Least Favorite Item Types
I don't think I have a least favorite.
I will not review...
Erotica or low-effort items.
Public Reviews
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Review by Rowan Oakenscale Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this short poem. I can feel emotions behind the words, even with how short the poem itself is. I don't quite understand what this is talking about, but the description itself gives me an idea. Still like the rhyming of the words. Anyways, write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't really understand the meaning behind the words very well, but I do like the wording. This makes me feel a certain way, even though, like I said, I don't understand the words put together in that way. It makes me feel something. Anyways, write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I absolutely love this poem. It is FILLED with emotion behind each word. I am not much of a poetic person, but this poem made me feel each word I read. Write on!
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
A nice poem. Could use some capitalization, and the "where have you been" line could use quotations like I just used. Also, It really feels like there isn't much... emotion behind the words. Besides that, the poem feels nice, but kind of doesn't. I don't know how to describe it.
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Review of Nightsky - WIP  Open in new Window.
Review by Rowan Oakenscale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I absolutely love the story on this!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love it! This piece reminded me of myself just a bit, with the whole writing style kind of thing, and I honestly think this would be a great read once edited. Write on!
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Review by Rowan Oakenscale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
For the other type, I like the old western type, like the ones from Gunsmoke or something.
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Review by Rowan Oakenscale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great poem (I'm not very poetic, but I like this). Though, the fourth stanza needs a comma after the word "shame." And for the fourth to last stanza (is that what they are called?), the "then" might need to be changed to "than." Your choice, though, so do whatever you want to. Great poem though!
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I have to say, this is a great start! I love how there is some segregation added! It gives some feeling of passion for the main character. There could be some added dialogue between characters to express this kind of separation between these half-breeds and the full-blooded dwarfs.
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Review by Rowan Oakenscale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this, this creates a metaphorical bridge to cross the gap of people who are afraid to show themselves, and those who are not afraid. It sounds a bit like an autobiography to me, so I started to wonder if this was on purpose. If it was, the idea is great, and the story is great. As a "furry" or whatever they call the group nowadays, I approve.
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Review by Rowan Oakenscale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this is a good short story. I think it would be great to see this as some children's book or something. It could teach them a lot, with how they learn.
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Review by Rowan Oakenscale Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love this! I don't like books with human-like characters, but this is something I like.

I do not see anything wrong with the direction of this, nice work!
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