i really like this poem, it is connecting. i love how you had thigs about the soul and it makes you think about what has happened to her in her past to turn her like this.
I like this, the way you put the peom together. I dont perfer the rhyming, some is good. but i think that i kinda fits with the poem, you could of not rhymed ever sentence, but good job.
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