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Dorianne

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Review of Psycho Puny Power

Review by Dorianne

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Good afternoon to Lover Of All Giantesses.
I picked Read & Review and your story was offered to me to read.
You have a style of writing a story that shows you have a nice imagination. Psycho Puny Power is different It includes a sort of magic that would fascinate many people. (I have a brother I would like to small size for a long time.) Your plot makes sense as you get further into the story. The story is just the right length. And the ending is one that could be an opening for another chapter to Ed's experience with the same characters.
I do see some small errors in spelling and omission of apostrophes (') for possession or omitted letters. A quick recheck of the story might help you see that.
I hope you had fun writing this story. Ed seems like a nice guy, once you get to know him. But he needs to keep a watch on his friends. (This being said all in fun.)
Have a great day.

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Review of For Such a Time

Review by Dorianne

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

I had plenty of time to watch television when I was young. And one of the most interesting and captivating movies was ESTHER. I think the actress did a marvelous job with emotions and showing the woman's role in ancient times.
In your essay, you have a very good synopsis. Your interpretation is clear and understandable. Esther did have a role in the plan that God made and gave her to do. And she did put God first in a dangerous situation she faced.

Your essay is a good one. It explains the heart of the story.

Thank you for sharing.