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Review of Five minutes  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.5)
I don't really care for the repettition of "In five minutes". I understand that it's the main idea.But change it up so its not boring! However, this had a lot of meaning and I enjoyed it!!
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Review of Lost  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.0)
You have a typo on line 5. But this is a very relatable poem. I enjoyed it.
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Review of Freedom  
Review by Kali
Rated: E | (3.5)
This poem was choppy, but well written. I feel like it had a few cliches like, "empty promises". I enjoyed how I felt a sense of relief at the end. I was happy for the girl and how she had found her freedom.
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