kaymilla's (kaymilla14) Reviews

Would be a sin to love. Released throughout my body. A reminder, life is tough. these three lines stood out to me during your poem. Never heard wording like this. Good Job! very creative.

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Review of Good Vs. Evil

Review by kaymilla

Rated: E

| (1.5)

The themeof this poem seems like it could be in a movie. How shes good like an angel durring the day and very evil at night. Short and to the point. I really like it

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#3825430

Review of First Period

Review by kaymilla

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

Can I go to the nurse?” “That sucks.” “I said that’s garbage.” “Whatever. Forget you, man.” “Fine. I’m out.”
when i got to this point I got a little confused because it all went together like a conversation then it went to "this sucks". So I'm guessing its just some things that he had said. Over all I really liked it.

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Review of How To Break A Heart

Review by kaymilla

Rated: E

| (1.0)

It's sad that it really is like that. Girls can be so gullible somtimes.

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#3817544

Review of Selfless Bastard

Review by kaymilla

Rated: E

| (4.5)

"Panting, gasping, running

Away. Away. Away.

Eyes wide

Fear, ravaging my body."

When reading this part of the poem, I can really picture this. It makes me think fear.