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Review of Imagine  Open in new Window.
Review by Skyfighter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
My First Impression:-

Great poem.I think you better call it lyrics because a poem should show and not tell.

*Yawn* How It Made Me Feel:-*Smile*

The poem is written lightly,
it does not makes me feel the pain.

*Heart*My Favorite Part *Heart*:-

Close your eyes
Imagine forever

*Cut*Any thing I would change:-

Imagine once more
Imagine we're together

what about putting something which rhymes more or increases the rhythm in place of (we're).

My Ratings:-


Rhyming = *Star**Star**Star**Star**Halfstar*
Rhythm = *Star**Star**Star**Star**Star*
Grammar = *Star**Star**Star**Star**Star*
Lines in poetry = *Star**Star**Star**Star**Star*
My Overall view = *Star**Star**Star**Star**Halfstar*


Keep Up The Good Spirit!


*Flower1* *Flower2* *Flower5* *Flower2**Flower1*

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Review of Fallen Angel  Open in new Window.
Review by Skyfighter Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem!

*Dollar*My Best Part Is:-

Their voices blend together
With the music of broken hearts
And on they fly together
Never to be apart.

*Star* *Star* *Star* *Star* *Star*

*Thumbsup*Keep Writing!!!

*Thumbsup*GOOD LUCK
*Smile*
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