Well Done. I felt the sadness, the slight hint of anger, but more so the disappointment. I like the imagery of the poem also the way I felt like I was sitting right next to the narrator and sharing mental pictures.I really enjoyed reading this poem.
I really enjoyed reading this story. The imagery of it is very well done. I especially like the last two sentences but I think they would be more powerful combined. Good Job.
Great Job! ^_^ I really love the way this poem flows & the rhythm of it. Your poem has so much emotion that it begins to affect the reader as soon as the first line has been read. I really liked the line about them dancing & the singing. I look forward to reading more of you writing.
Great Job! ^_^ I really think that this is an amazing poem. I love the rhythm & the flow of it. I also really like the emotion of it the way it's very deep & fierce at the same time & the way that it ver straight forward without being cold. Your poem is a really wonderful & beautiful piece of art.
Wow I really like your poem. It speaks to poeple, I like poems such as this poems the readers can relate to they make you feel like you're not the only one. I also like it beacause even though it already has a meaning you can still find your own meaning in it.
Great Job ^_^
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