Hi Faith Raine! I really loved this poem. It was great and the last line - This is not goodbye my love till we meet again, it was so touching and sweet. Keep filling your canvas here on this site and really loved your bio. Hope to talk to you soon
It is an amazing piece of poetry. Really enjoyed it and felt the bond which I share with my mom. " Mom never care for their own happiness but for ours ." Really enjoyed it and fell in love with the line - you get tickled, your eyesight up. Keep writing
Wow! It's great! I really loved the strong bond between the man and the woman and it is very heart touching and full of emotions. I especially loved the last line because it's true that if we don't love something deeply then we won't miss it when it's gone. Amazing piece of work. Keep writing.
It was a really great piece of work created by you and loved the way it describes the weather and the surrounding. I loved the part where you mentioned about robins and the satsuma tree. Keep on creating great works for the world of WDC to read. Awesome work
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